Carer's Feet 1.5 - The Carer's Perspective (Dedicated to Clover and SalvyMic)
This is a complete rewrite of my first story, Carer's Feet (http://themousepad.yuku.com/topic/133085/Carers-Feet), told this time from the carer's perspective and adding in many more details. As the...
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I'm honored that you wanted to dedicate this story to me and Clover, but let me tell you, you stand on your own as a writer. I really hope to read some more from you in the future, and it was my...
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I'm so, SO glad you both like it! :D
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Just as good as the first part. Really unique two different point of views now. I would love to read about "next week" can't wait for that. I know you would deliver.
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I'm really glad you liked it! :) I'm thinking that, "next week", the other carer will suddenly be available, so the other carer turns the physio session into a dare competition. Does that sound good?...
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You have a good thing here, so I would keep it as the carers perspective. Very few stories are written in the receivers position. Keep it up, it's very good!
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You could also try alternating POVs between the boy and the carer throughout the course of the story.
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Hmm... food for thought.
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I like both. I would love to just hear both sides again because that was very interesting.
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